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for Bankotsu's Harem

by dragonflyelj

person Twilight
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Love the fact that the girls finally get a slave of their own! And a yummy one at that! *huggles* Keep up the great writing! I'm anticipating your next update!
person DarkImmortal
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfull story! I started reading and I coulden't stop, not even to revew the other wonderflul chapters. Although 6 didn't show up (I was saddened by that) But The context was fine to the point that it left no confusion. Once again, WONDERFUL story, Keep in and the charicters Comming! :-) Heh.
person Tom
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How will Ayame command him, she chained like a pet wolf???
Semper Fidelis
person tueesday
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liky very much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I like the way kagome got out of her turn. Can't wait to find out the punishment for the sango thing. UPDATE
person stayingput29
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
review chap 12.... LMAO.... Cussing you is understatement.... I want to know what the punishment is... I mean come on... they had taken *with force* these girls eginegin with.... *trying to write review and my son is playing drums on pots and pans.... brb*

one fight later

and now for my review.... I want to know.... will he have to have sex with Sango infront of everyone to deminstrate is betrail.... ???.... Huh Huh.... Will he be punishined then rewarded for coming clean... I just don't know.... they all seem a little wack to me (not that I don't like a few freak boys)... but Bankotsu... lol.. seems like he needs kicked off his high horse... although I would make a great Harem girl... he he... anyway... I am all cought up and no where to go... so that means that you .... YES YOU

person STAYINGPUT29
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DAMN THING POSTED BEFORE I WAS DONE!!!! WTF

ANYWAY as I was saying you need to get new chap in motion... whats the problem... surely not out of sex scenes plenty more to be had... his punishment??? you stuck there??? I think he should have to have sex again... he he... just for the perv in me... I want them all to watch... the girls and the guys.... or oh no... he he... he has same punishment as Kagome... he he... must to jak... can't spell name but you know who I mean... so many punishments you could give me ... he he... lets get creative I know you can do it... bring it on... Mules is so ready.... I mor more... woohoo

Huggles
Mules
person stayingput29
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
chapter 11 review.... I WANT TO BE IN THE HAREM!!!!! *clears throut*..... enough said.... he he

Huggles
Mules
person stayingput29
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well poor Sango.... and Ke whe what happens when no one stands up for her mouth.... she is in no position to running that mouth ... her pet is not around.... he he... anyway great chap six and moving to chap 7...

Huggles
Mules

person stayingput29
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well now I can't tell if Kikyo enjoyed it or not... poor girl... and the girl that has to give the baths... I wounder who you will put her with first and what of poor sango??? will she ever been out with the other girls again... I like this story very much and it is unfolding nicely.... So here is review for chap seven and I must move on so I can get all cought up this yr...lol

Huggles
Mules
person stayingput29
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
chapter eight review.... More... More.... More.... Kagome the vixen... woohoo.... I liked she going to turn a gay man strait.... WHAT A WOMAN!!! he .. a.. any howdy whoooo!!!! loved the chap.... bravo girly and now must move on to see what is going on....

Huggles
Mules