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Happy dances ^^
Well you already know what i think about your work...
Till next chappie,
Ja ne,
and remember SANKONTESSOU lol


kawool ^^

can u tell me who you are gonna pair kagome with? i for one hope inuyasha rescues her before anything happens to her. e-mail me.

okay, just got through with the second chapter, hope to be able to read the third. I see you did a little difference from the storyline in Inuyasha but hey, Kikyo has to be living and breathing, not made out of clay. heh heh. You have some good detail going on. Was that the giant that got AYame? I got a little fearful when you brought him in there, expecially when he asked Ayame if she wanted to *play* (shudders) . Great fight scene between Ayame and the big guy. ( I can't pronouce
their name really good yet or for that matter spell them. got to work on it. Well, the good doctor has KIkyo. I am on to the next chapt to see what is going to happen. Ras.

Wow, I got to read to the fourth chapter! yays. anywho. ya got me hooked with wondering what will happen next.I loved the idea of the panda youkai. original. I kinda like her character (could be I am partial to pandas. he he.) Yes, I have heard the
gesh gesh laugh. It nearly drove me nuts too. Cringed a little when they got Kagome and Sango....NAKED...ack! Imagining
being taken captive naked is so scary!. Actually the poison user scares me too..ick. I remember the episode where he got
Kagome. freaky little guy! All in all you got good imagery going on and detail. THe background and characters are being set up pretty good as well. Will watch for update and read if I get the chance. (got kids too). ^_^. Ras.

Pretty good.What are the pairings?

Hey there ^^

Well i really like how the story progress.. (love also LONG chapters ^^)
I can't wait to see some action *hehehe*

Till next chappie, take care

Celia

Kawaï ^o^
New chap is up!!! yeepee!!!
Even if i do NOT like Kikyo, i must admit that her paring with Suikotsu is quite attractive...hehehe
Keep writting

ja ne

Kawool, yeah you definetly sounds like Souta-chan lol^o^
(did ya receive my mail ???)

You go girl!! I love Bankotsu!! he is one sexy bad ass. Hye did you notice thonloonlotsu looks like Kouga absent the tan and elf ears. just me. Anyhow. I angree don't like him being paired with Jonkotsu (think I slaughtered that) I love the entire concept. I also like that your using Kikyo in this fic. Alot of people don't understand her your so right about that but thats usually people who haven't seen many eps and have not read the manga. It takes a mature mind to grasp what she has been through and what she is grappling with. I even had a open debate about her on the woo hoo website by the way your invited to join all writers are. I was hoping you would have Ras and some other writers are there often for chat. Anyway enogh babbling. I LOVE OUR FIC!! I love your using Kikyo!!! Cant wait for updates!!! and thanks for reviewing my work lik you so often do. *HUGGLES*






Kiea


aka animechisk262003

OMG pleaseeeee keep writtin I love it IT'S SO ORIGINAL!!!! I personally have a little crush on him and can't get enough ^_^ well if you EVER need ANY help with a new muse or anything i am FILLED WITH IDEAS!!!!! so ask away ,O and don't worry i have personal experience with other good writters that i have "helped" so don't be shy.........Please keep writting and keep it original because you have a great idea here and you are the only one in aff that has a Bakoutsu fan fiction so make it GOOD! o and i would like to request for this fic to be Bakoutsu/Kagome if you please.........O and i almost forgot my I.M. is Spacegirlval and my E-mail is LittleCherryBlossom@mail2world.com so now u don't have an excuse not to reach me LO*_* *_*
well see ya later alligator..

~Val~

Bravo ^o^

You make it !!! Feel very proud of ya Erica-chan !
I can't wait to see more so keep writting !!!

Ja ne

Kawool

And remember "SANKONTESSOU" lol ^^