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for Bankotsu's Harem

by dragonflyelj

person fgfgh
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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person Kawool
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^O^ Woohoo ^O^ 2500 hits !

You go girl!

Should i bring back readers lil butt in order to get more reviews ? LOL

Well, lyou,you, Bankotsu is ONE of my little infactuations...I only have like 97 pic's of him, and wet dreams about him too (déjà vu,ne?)Looks like Inutaisho is my new one....same for Sessy! LMAO

Anyways...

As for this chappie, i do love how it is written and all i can say is that you are a dam good author; moreover i'm glad you're getting ews ews from great authors such as Chicky,Mija,Ras and all...

Of course it's just MY objective point of view!!! LMAO

So please keep up the good work and update as soon as possible otherwise i'm gonna Kokoro No Kizu your lil butt !!!

Miss ya at Woohoo too...

Huggles

Your fan & friend

Kawool

(Wow i cannot believe i've just written this LONG review ! You dam sure inspired me ! Btw i probably murdered the spelling lol ^-^)
person Shichinintaigirlover
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ty for this update !
This chapter is really interesting, poor girls !
i can't wait to read the next one *hehe*
Please keep writing and update soon
person Ras~~~
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sango. Poor Kagome. Feel so sorry for them. being branded. ack!.... I see Kikyo is being the quiet obedient one. Loved the interaction between her and the doctor. Nice. I also thought Panjiro (did i spell that right?) being punished in that way was a good touch. By being shackled to another being she was being punished and trained to be near people at the same time.
Liked how she tore Jakutso a new one. Heh, she gave him a good scratching. lol. and this was such a nice long chapter too.
Arigato. can't wait to see some action with a nakie Ban. lol.

Till next update. Ras~~~~~~~~~
person Naheta
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey girl nice chapp keep up the good work.


Naheta
person youkai tsuki
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have been enjoying the story while lurking about. You gave me goosebumps with the training. Very good so far. Keep it up.




youkai tsuki
person Ras
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woa, training, that was harsh. It made me kinda tired reading it. lol I actually felt sorry for KIkyo! ack! how did you do that?
he he. You know I am not a kikyo fan. ahem... anywhoodles. I think it's going great! Will await the update and the chance to see Bankotsu in action. loved the almost nakie of him in the recent episodes. *nearly faints*


Ras
person ahickhick262003
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well loved chapter Three. On to chapter Four. ^__^
person Mules
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well now... I must say... great start... I am only on chapter one for I am way behind on my reading as everyone knows.... ve sve so many already started I need to catch up on.... But was informed by a friend that this one is good and a must read... so here I am and moving on now to chap two... I will catch up some day.... Great Job and Keep it up....

Your Fan and Friend

Mules
person animchick262003
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awe man I want to be in Bonkotsu's Harem. Puweeese. Poor Panjiro. I love her character. hmmm I f I had to be taken, I suppose I would want, Bonkotsu,Ronkotsu(The priest) or the doctor none of the others though. Anyways on to chapter Five. Tee Hee....