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I'm curious, was this story discontinued? Or is it going to be finished? Oh and I have an idea you might like. Since it is 'Bankotsu's Harem' why not have them ordered to preform for him {ya know dancing} I bet he'd love that! XD

OMGOMGOMGOMG! That was... well hot! Bankotsu is sooooo yummy and I think you are doing a fantastic job so far... I am sitting here reading this and I can feel my face growing warm. Anyways, I really liked the last line. It had the right impact on the reader at the end and well, good job!! ^^

You know, I believe you have turned me into a Sango/Suikotzu fan... originally I was like Kikyou/Suikotzu all the way and end the "InuYasha/Kikyou mutual obsession but not really love" thing, but I love Sango with Sui. As well, Bankotsu is...an enigma. What is he all about? He is a ruthless mercenary who seems to have no feelings for anyone, but he has been...er... tender with all the women.

Anyways, good job.

SereneLies

I think that this is one of the best stories I have read thus far, the plot is well mantained, the charactors each have a definate personality of their own and it left me wanting more than the 16 chapters that were there.

I approve the Sango/Suikotsu pairing.

Great story so far. I've only gotten to chapter two but I thought I might as well do my job as a reader. *grin*

"This was just too much, she would not loose to an opponent..."

I fricken do this all the time. I write loose instead of lose. My pants are too loose and I might lose them in a second. Spell check never gets it and I keep reading over it and never find it on my own works...but of course I spot it on everyone else's *rolls eyes*

I'll review again when I'm done reading...but since you're in the re-editing process, I thought I would let you know of that.

This fan fic was amazing everyone was in character (Even when a few wrent In character it was still good) despite the fact i am a Kagome hater i was hoping she'd get with Renkotsu i don't know why but i think they'd make an adorable couple. and on the plus side its nice to read an InuYasha fan fic with Kagomes tolerable side actually in character ;P as for the originals they where well done not a single shred of Mary-Sue in them. i have a suggestion why not make a threesome with Bankotsu Kikyou and Suikotsu, and Kagome with Renkotsu?

I wish i was in it so i could have a go with Bankotsu ^^; but thats what imagination is for.

i keep reading your story and everytime it gets better ^^

Awesome story! Cool idea. At first I was kinda skeptical about reading it but as I read on I decided that I liked your writhing style and the fact that you had all of in characters acting like themselves. Great lemons, the one between Kagome and Bankotsu was funny! The only ones that got on my nerves were all the ones that involved Sango(didn't like that she was with my- I mean with Suikotsu(TWICE)very much) and Ayame( Her lemon with Bankotsu was kinda boring. Over all great story, keep it up! By the way, is anyone going to get pregnant?

i must say you have a talent for writing this stuff right, the girls are not THAT mistreated ;) its so sad we have 3 studs willing to please us :P j/k i sure hope youll be updating someday o.O in the near future :P
good job,
there are many weird mistakes though, sometimes you just type the same letters over and over again skipping a word and such
ex: she haphappy = she was happy...kinda confusing at times o.O