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person Gringolton
schedule December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love the story! please post next chapter soon.. oh and have a merry christmas!
person BMW
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE!!!
person emily
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHH!!!!!! sooooooooooooooooooooo good!!! thats all i can say....its....so good...please...update-i cant wait to read more!!
person RavenShadow
schedule December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter! I can not wait to see what InuYasha does next and Iso hso happy that Kagome and Rin are away from Naraku! Please update soon this is a great story!
person Beruda
schedule December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
At first the whole slave thing kind of bothered me but I think you've done a good job fleshing out this story. I'm looking forward to the rest.
person Galalorton
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Toou iou i would re-review... ok now to cut through the crap... i liked this chapter, i saw no mistakes in the writing (though i wasn't looking)) and the despritive value was great and didnt make take ten pages to despribe a plate... oh well just as most people say update soon!
person New Fan
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am glad that Inuyasha has saved her and Rin form Naraku. I wonder now if Sess will show his face in later chapters. I hope so, get Rin off Inuyasha's hand and be with Sess. Update soon.
person Jackie
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like the start of your story and I hope you continue to update. I will keep checking to until you do! =)
person DelKaidin
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Still good Jane...

Glad Inu got Rin out of there too. Be waiting for more
person Galalorton
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story has alot of potential... i mean a good author, a good plot and a anime i personally like. i'll keep in touch just please update soon!