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by Clockworkknight

person littleolmee
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
long time no see clockwork, nice alt ending. will you be taking up the story this is off of again? i hope so.
person meggie
schedule December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories, they're dark and kinda pervented but exstremeyl well written. i love this one too as I love Mind games.
person ClockworkKnight
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow, never thought id get so many reviews for a side story. To all who left me a reveiw, thank you. The next chapter of Mind games will be up soon.

here lie link to Mind Games for every ones whos looking for it

http://adultfan.nexcess.net/aff/story.php?no=12542
person HMPrune
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great ending - it tied in really well with the main story. Hope that there will be less ansty scenes with Kagome to try and heal Inuyasha...
person tigers_eye
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Can you tell us where we can find your main story, Mind Games, so those of us not familiar w/ it can read it? Thanks.
person Mija
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
just wanted to post a review here since I finally got on the site..lol..anyhow you know i love your chaps and am soo glad Ive been able to read them via email from the group which in turn ive sent in my reviews..lol..but I wanted to let ya know again how awsome your story is and cant wait for an update to Mind Games..again great chaps..makes me cry but I like it..least I know what happened to Inu now..sniffles ty ty huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
person kenji
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i hope inuyasha finds the human that did this to him. his body will heal soon, then its ass-kicking time for that human and kagura
person New Fan
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Does Inuy bla blames Kagome for his predicament. That is what I am getting out of this story. Well I hope that she be the one to find him.
person tigers_eye
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I loved the new chapter! Don't know why, but I'm one of those types that likes the hero being in danger, especially our favorite half-demon. Keep going. Only one little, tinsy problem: I find it hard to believe IY would believe his friends--and, especially, Kagome--would not look for him, nor have any faith in him. Though I have to admit, I'm reading this as a stand-alone story; haven't read Mind Games, at least that I can recall, so I might have missed something. Anyway, keep up the excellent work.
person tigers_eye
schedule November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More! More! What's going to happen?