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for Tails Up!

by Riomi

person Kajin
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more please................. i will kill you if your don't make more but i have a feeling you will
person Manda
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hehe, I like Inuyasha's last comment about her naming the pups.
person Wilwarin03
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
Brilliant!!!

It does make sense... why *shouldn't* Inu have a tail?

And PUPPIES!!! Cute.

If you're going to wra sea sequel, please do. I want to know more about Inu's tail and the pups. ^_^
person MelMuff
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo...I can't wait for the sequel and all those cute little puppies. It's a really good fic that you've wrote. Good luck in the future!
person moumowi the unvoicedsigner
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yes alittel to much forplay but still verygood
oo and plez make the pups have their daddys ears but their mommys eyes then you can pick from there
person ...
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was soo good! at first i didn't like the tail idea but it was..yeah good! puppies!!!^_____^
person Fallen
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
InuYasha with a tail? How kawaii! Thanks for showing us how he can put it to good use ^_^ Great story.
person Chokoreeto Ame
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't think you got carried away at all with the foreplay, it was very well done. The lemon was good too, esp. since it was your first, I know you prob. wrote it in a frenzy but try and watch the grammar next time. I'm looking forward to a sequel!
person yelly
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it took you long enough to update
but i love this fic short and sweet
so she is goign to have pups?
Great update soon
please
person drake220
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great, absolutely wonderful fic! and the lemon was not overdone, it was descriptive. i liked it alot. very sexy. after reading this fic, i'm reading your other ones! yay for sequels!!