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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked it but you made Kagome seem like a twit.
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! U SUK!! ..................your fic. rocked! its just the ending that threw me off guard. but don't worry, like i said b-fore, it kicked ass!
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hahha, i liked this story very much, im expecting a sequel and cant wait ! =D
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was really really good, e-mail me when u've updated, ja!
~Let the peacefulness of water be still in your walk in the life ahead...~
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~Let the peacefulness of water be still in your walk in the life ahead...~
~Hªtﮪ-Dªüghtë®_ºf_Wªtë®~
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good job, e-mail me @ friends_4evr_93@hotmail.com or look @ my profile Hatira142004 for more details, and use that 2 e-mail me when u've updated
ja!
ja!
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July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great fic, i enjoyed reading it very much and can't wait for the sequel.
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July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi there! I just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed this... it's very cute - especially the ending. I can't wait for the sequal! ^_^ WEEEEE!!! Little Inuyasha's bouncing around! However, I'm a little concerned.
Now, this is just my personal adoration of Inu-chan talking here, and I know this was a first shot at Inu/Kag, and you said their would OOCness, but still. I'm a bit alarmed at how much, um... authority Kagome has over Inuyasha. Believe me, I love Kagome, but I'm not so pleased with the idea that Inu is at her mercy in the way you describe. Of course, he has to worry about the all-mighty sit, but I'm concerned that fanfiction authors have been going overboard on the feminine control in the Inuyasha series because of 'Sit.' Also, Kagome kinda comes off as a bit of an... and I apologize for this greatly... a bit of an ornery, testy snit. Truthfully, she has no real right to be mad at Inu for not talking about his tail; it's not her business.
Again, I'm sorry if this offended you - that wasn't the intention. I just wanted to let you know in case you wanted an opinion from someone whose on Inu's side. Maybe it'll help you in your future Inuyasha fanfics. I hope you're not furious, and I DO like this story: Inuyasha's major, unfair subjugation is the only thing I have problems with.
~ Firefrost
Now, this is just my personal adoration of Inu-chan talking here, and I know this was a first shot at Inu/Kag, and you said their would OOCness, but still. I'm a bit alarmed at how much, um... authority Kagome has over Inuyasha. Believe me, I love Kagome, but I'm not so pleased with the idea that Inu is at her mercy in the way you describe. Of course, he has to worry about the all-mighty sit, but I'm concerned that fanfiction authors have been going overboard on the feminine control in the Inuyasha series because of 'Sit.' Also, Kagome kinda comes off as a bit of an... and I apologize for this greatly... a bit of an ornery, testy snit. Truthfully, she has no real right to be mad at Inu for not talking about his tail; it's not her business.
Again, I'm sorry if this offended you - that wasn't the intention. I just wanted to let you know in case you wanted an opinion from someone whose on Inu's side. Maybe it'll help you in your future Inuyasha fanfics. I hope you're not furious, and I DO like this story: Inuyasha's major, unfair subjugation is the only thing I have problems with.
~ Firefrost
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July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sweetie, there is no such thing as too much foreplay. there is sucha thing as too ittle but that doesn't apply here. for your first lemon, that was masterfully done. very nice! sexy adn cute. i liked thi chapter the best b/c kag wasn't being some psycho bitch in this chapter. i mean, she was a moron in 1 and 2. great short ficlet! really cute
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May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No, no! Foreplay is...good, and more more is better. -_-;; Errr...heh heh! ^_^;; Anyhoo this was pretty good, I think I'll take a peek at your other stories if you have any here...^_^ Until next time! ^_^
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May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is SO damned adorable and cute! I practically wet myself when I saw Inuyasha has a tail. A very nice idea, and one I haven't seen before in a fic yet either.