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December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey!!! Wonderful story... it's getting really interesting! The only thing I would work on (your second chapter was much better about this) is spelling errors and punctuation... I'll help you and beta for you if wantwant! Anyway, nice job!
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December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Like the story line and the fic is great keep up with the good work.
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December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oooh I liked that chap..hot hot hot dance..hehe and Kouga is pissed aint he??/ he he what he gets..please update soon cant wait to see what happens and sooo cant wait for the lemon..huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
S'okay. Go with tha flow. I can be patientallyally I can.
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December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just read this today and it's reaLLy good.
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November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiicccccccccccceeeeeeeeee.
Do please keep it up.
;) A short review this time.
Ja!
Do please keep it up.
;) A short review this time.
Ja!
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November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice Chapter! Loved the dance...
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg u have no idea how much i love this fic....please please update soon. i can't wait to read more....
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Really good the lust is already getting to them! Hehe, really good chapter! Keep it up!
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great chapter so sexy yet still moderate very well done
it leaves alot to the amagination
the all time girl fantacy
a sexy tango hole with a hot guy
close enough to sex keap writeing
it leaves alot to the amagination
the all time girl fantacy
a sexy tango hole with a hot guy
close enough to sex keap writeing