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for A Bet With In A Deal

by peachgirl21

person Queen
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think it was really cool. so please update soon.
person Tamar
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You still need a beta reader?
person TreeGRL
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
all i can say for this is, NICENESS!! ^-^ and update as soon as you have time to , i can wait some ppl these days are so rude, flaming authors to just get the next chapter out!! well as u can read i don't like ppl doing that. but i really like your fic!! ^-^ =P
person lil_angel
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow this story is much better than i thought it would be...very good...i hope you update soon...thanks
person inu-fanforever
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
the story itself is sooo much better than the summary!! Great fic so far!
person inu-fanforever
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aww man, no more to read...and it's good! update soon please...and she should find out about inuyasha and miroku reading her notebook...which seems to essentially be her diary..
person psycho
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you have a good story, but you need to edit. if you like i will edit it for you. just emai the story to me and i'll get it back toy you as soon as possible
person jodibetz
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Glad ur back!
person jodibetz
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Glad ur back!
person jodibetz
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Glad ur back!!!