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for A Bet With In A Deal

by peachgirl21

person No One Knows
schedule November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This looks really, really good! I hope you write more soon! oh and you spell it "Miroku and Sango"
person rei
schedule November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
dam this is a great story u must update soon i love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Lullaby2021
schedule November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very funny, very funny. I like it. It is like nothing that I have read before. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
person Kaye
schedule November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yeah she's a prude. Definatly a prude, you know with the drawings and the accepting so soon, very prude thing to do. Awesome start, you must continue!!!!!!
person YELLY
schedule November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
SO SO FUNNY
HURRY WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER
IT'S SO FUNNY
I LOVE IT