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for Silent Heart

by Kagomechan

person Subaru
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this story alot I cant wait for the next chapter!
person KagoKitty
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you finally updated!! Wow...its been a while, huh?? lol, keep up the good work 'c i r i really love this storyline!!
=^-.~^=
person Panthera
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like it nee-chan. please keep writting. You have skills!

Love,
~Nee-chan~
Panthera
person shaina
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finally! lol, seriously though. I love all of the new twists and turns. I was worried when you had the sweety that is inuyasha rape kagome. But i'm glad it worked out. Please add a new chapter soon.
person Numisma
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
quite an interesting scenario for the setup of the fic. i would, however,gestgest that you work on segues, because there are times when you move too fast and the story would have more impact if you took more time to explain the impending situations. work on it, and you can improve :)
person :(
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
when are you going to update?
person Inari-foxgoddess
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U HAVE 2 UPDATE SOON! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! PLEASE EL MEL ME WHEN YOU UPDATE BECAUSE I HAVE TO READ THE NEW CHAPTER AS SOON AS IT IS OUT!
person Mija
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooh poor Kagome...soo glad Naraku is dead..I hope...but poor thing..Im sure the whole Inu being a red eyed demon scared the shit outta her..and then the claiming..yes ok the rape, even if Inu felt he had to do it to make sure no one hurt her again by taking her from him...it was still rape cause he didnt ASK her if she wanted him and after what her supposid father did you can imagine her fear..sigh poor Kags...please update soon k?? ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
person KagoKItty
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sigh...poor kaggy...poor inu, i'm so happy naraku's finally dead, update soon, chica!!
=^-.~^=
person Sara-sama
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Inuyasha....*tsk, tsk*....you shouldn't have done that! He should have made her his mate with love and tenderness! What does he do? Raper! r! You were supposed to prove to Kagome that you were the OPPOSITE of Naraku! Feh! *bangs head against wall* MEN!!! Now he has to prove himself even more to win Kagome's love, affection, and most importantly, her trust!!!!!