rate_review Reviews

Up to chapter three now. I do like this tale. It's simple in a way yet sweetly interesting. I see in your notes that you almost decided not to continue because you had no reviews. From one author to another, please don't see it like that. This story is
well done and very interesting. I have seen some wonderful stories that had no reviews what so ever but they were still wonderful. Reviews are nice but what you shouonsionsider is the fun in creating something that you like and would like to read. I love to write and create a story that I would love to read over and over again. If you like what you write don't sweat it. Someone else is bound to as well. I don't get the chance to read much since I write so much but I do believe this is one of the greater stories that I have read. Keep up the great work. I see poetic talent in your style. Now, to the next chap. Ras.

On chapter four. Love the way the story is flowing. Not to fast, not to slow. InuYasha's and Kouga's introduction was done very well. I see that everyone seems to be in charac And And kagome, for her situation, is as well. She acted appropiately concerning Kouga's request for her to be his (woman). I see you ease the series characteritics within the dialoge without it
sounding *corny*. I am very interested in what will happen to Kagome and Rin. Will continue on. Ras.

Just finished the last chapter. It is really good! the whole story so far! Yes, I am awaiting the Sess/Rin but I am also intrigued with Kagome and Inuyasha also. The plotline is fresh and original. I will so wait for the next installment.
Ras applauds your excellent writing and wonderful tale. I will look forward to updates! Until next time. Ras.

Aw....man that was sweet! ^^ *bonks Kouga* What kinda offer was that?!
Kouga: Hey! It just came out! :[ Besides, I'm the lord...
Of pervertedness! *bonk* CREEP! *bonk* Hentai! *bonk*
:P As you can tell, I'm definitely waiting for the Inu/Kag bits...Update soon!

What happens next??!!! Oh, I'm so impatient sometimes! ^_^ How does Kagome meet Inuyasha and what happens e she she's in Koga's household? Please write more of this story - it's really good!

HAPPY BDAY !!!
Well, i 'm fond of your fic so please keep writtin'
Ja ne ^o^
Célia (aka Kawool)

VERY VERY good chapter!!!!!!! so sweet!!!!!!!!!!!! please keep going!

I love this story. This story is different from every r str story I have read and that is why I love it. I am making a story that is deferent from every story to but it is not as good as yours. You story is the best I ever read. How did you come up with the idea of the story.Will you email me when upd update I what to know what happens and who is Hujo's cuz.

I think that you story is innovative, and just all-round great. I've never read anything for IY with a plot line in any way like it. You broke a mold and I thank you to please keep writing.

This is a very good story and very well written. I can not wait to see what awaits Kagome and Rin in the future. I hope you update.