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for Seeking the Hime's Heart

by EvilNekoEatsYourSoul

person Sara
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter - Kagome agrees to be Koga's wife. Poor Kagome, though she doesn't feel any more love for Koga than she did for Hojo. I hope Kagome gets the love she deserves to have, as she feels so lonely, unloved, and pretty much unwanted - except for Rin, that is! I know it was the thing back then for the ladies of the house to have their children tended by wet nurses, but I think Koga should have thought that out more, realizing how much Rin means to Kagome. She's the only sunshin her her days! But that's a male for you! When will you update? I would like to read more! ^_^
person anhimals
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i like your story. its very interesting. now i am eager to read how you will write inuyasha into kagome's life. i thought it was very original hin iin is kagome's daughter. update soon!
person The Dragon
schedule November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You have to just _hope_ that I would like this chapter? Of course I did! You should give yourself more credit than that! ;) Kouga's feeling for Kagome, and how he wants to be a daddy, were so sweet! This was an excellent chapter, and I eagerly await more. =D
person RekkaShinen
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Kouga/Kagome... I'm a fan of the pairing, but I can't wait until you get to the Kag/Inu pairing! *smiles* Your story is really good so far and I can't wait to see what else lies ahead!! Ja ne!! ^.~ v
person Panthera
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Here i am again! I love this story it's soooo sweet! I have a question.............Dosent Inuyasha later mind that sha has sleepet with 2 men already? well i LOVE this story please keep writting !!! And thanks for updating so fast it cam in handy when there was ABSOLUTLY NOTHING to do. I went online and there i saw that u updated i wanted to hug the computer! well se ya later alligator!!

~Panthera~
person New Fan
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like the chapter, but I have a question. Will Kagome be a "black-widow"meaning will Kouga meet the same fate as Houjo that is he will die a similar death. I hope not for Kagome sake because if that happen then what those women said that she is cure will be true. Update soon.
person kenji
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i know u tried really hard not to make it so, but it does seem as though kagome is being ::ahem:: 'passed around'. i dont think in the culture at the time a man like inuyasha, a high ranking man, would take a women that has been involved so with others. and so far all of kagome's relationships seem forced on her, and she seemed reluctant. i hope her relationship with inuyasha is out of love and not forced
person kenji
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great fic. i stated before i dont like hojo. but i hate kouga even more lol:) this fic is killing me, i hope u get to the kag/inu parts soon
person Kawool
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, i still love it so plz update asap coz i'm addicted ^o^!!!
I wonder if the rivality between Inuyasha & Kouga will be there ...Can't wait to see
Thx 4 your kawai answers !!!

Celia ( aka Kawool)

ps > sorry 4 the spelling but as a french girl my english is not perfect ^o^
person Rasberries
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just got finished with the first chapter and I have to say you are an extremely talented writer. Love the way you portray Houjo and Kagome. Its a very good chapter. You caught Kagome's innocence perfectly and Houjo personality quite well I believe.
I can say one thing. I wish I had a man that thought the way he does. Wow. I know in your first noou sou said that Kagome will not be with Houjo long. I find that a little disheartening since he fell in love with her at first sight. Oh well, will continue reading to see how the rest of the story goes. It's great stuff. Ras.