rate_review Reviews

Very much the elegant wording you have chosen! I'm am greatly impressed with the intensity with which you depict Kagome's feelings, partiularly when it came to "to me, love does not exist..." I am deeply touched, and was in tears at Hojou's death -- but I can't wait until Kagome and Inuyasha's part begins. Please continue soon! ^_^

three simple words I D ITD IT! i can't wait till i hear more, i made me cry but i'm ready for some Inu/kag. can't wait till u write more.

NOW are we gonna see some IY/Kag & Sess/Rin action? @.@ <-- puppy-dog eyes... PLEASE?

You ease into the dynamics of the plot very well. Subtle yet powerful in meaning. I can almost see this happening because it
is quite close to reality concerning some asian cultures in that time period. Women are there to serve men. Period. Lords and people of wealth most certaintly had concubines and s Kag Kagome seems lost, a deep hidden part of her is yearning for love. This part is even hidden to her. It will be interesting to see where you take this story, especially the very blatant problems between Kagome and Kouga. I like your character interactions no matter who they are. The story is a good one. Your writing is well rounded and visual. Will await the next
installment.


Ras~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

interesting chapter. i am just really waiting for the chapter when kagome will finally be with inuyasha and want to see how hoga will her her go. update soon.

nice story nice pace i am glad you are not rushing it.


Naheta

great job. i hope you get to the inu/kag scenes soon.

i hope the reason she cant conceive a child is because she is a human, and he is a WOLF demon. I am sure a human and a hanyou could conceive one together (wink wink). im guessing that kouga in gonna be an asshole in the next chap, and give kagome to inuyasha as his tribute, as in dumping kagome so he can be with ayame. and you say the pairing is rin/sesshoumaru, so i hope the sesshoumaru in ur fic is like 5 years old, or however old Rin is (you never gave it, but you said she cant talk yet, so im guessing like 2 or 3)

Hmmm.....so Koga is cheating on Kagome with Ayame? Interesting....I hope Kagome gets some backbone soon, and gets herself into a better situation *with Rin of course*. I don't think she's going to put up with Ayame too much longer, or I hope so anyway! And she and Koga are going to the Western lands, to meet Fluffy? Will Inuyasha be there? More!!!

I am glad that you have this chapter because it has giving me insight on how Kouga and Kagome will eventually separate and how Inuyasha and Kagome will content with each other. Update soon.