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January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! I have to keep remembering that the story is put in a certain time period where it was "expected" for women to be very subservient. *sigh* ^_^ Inuyasha didn't have to get so angry with Kagome though - she just wanted to find out more about the entrancing hanyou! I wish Kouga could have let Kagome bring Rin, but....like the times. How will this affect how Kagome sees Inuyasha? And for Kouga and Kagome? I can't wait to read more! Surely by now Inuyasha is curious about Kagome? Or does he just see her as "Kouga's wife"? Hmmm......
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January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am greatly enjoying this story - perhaps moreso than ANY other Inuyasha fanfiction I have read before, from any site. I, like the other Firefrost that reviewed, cried at Houjo's death; he was a sweet samurai, and never intended to harm anyone... I find it a tragedy, truthfully - even though Inuyasha/Kagome is my absolute favourite couple, period.
I cannot WAIT for the Inu/Kag interaction/relationship to get rolling on the ball! Please update very soon; I have been left hanging on a limb again!
`Firefrost
I cannot WAIT for the Inu/Kag interaction/relationship to get rolling on the ball! Please update very soon; I have been left hanging on a limb again!
`Firefrost
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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YEAH you updated happy dan!!!
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I L O V E I T
huggles
Kawool
I L O V E I T
huggles
Kawool
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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was so excitied to see that u updated, it seemed forever since u have. i love how the story is going, yet it's sad but keeps me wanting more. your doing a great job and i can't wait till what hnds nds next time between InuYasha and Kagome. keep up the great work :)
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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have been enjoying this story and waiting patiently for a update. It's original and I like how you've tapped into Kagome's sadness and expressed it so well. OK I'm back to waiting.
youkai tsuki
youkai tsuki
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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I could almost feel Kagome's nervousness and emotions of not fitting in. I loved how you introduced
Inuyasha to Kagome. I think you captured his personality perfectly. Hmmm. I really need to be taking notes. I so loved the way you described Sesshoumaru. Perfect. Absolutely dead on. That scene with the Kouga and Sess aag wag was a good one too. Liked the way you slipped in their conversation as Kagome was offhandedly listenting. Concerning the scene when Inuyasha barged in on Kagome. I loved it. Very characteristic of him. He is angry at the world it seems. I caught what Inuyasha said about her being a pampered noble woman who has never even lost a......*hair piI goI got the symbolism in that statement and what Inuyasha really meant. You have a veiled way of making the reader quite interested and wanting to know what happens next. Your words flow and the reading is easy.
Hope you do continue with this ancient tale.
Inuyasha to Kagome. I think you captured his personality perfectly. Hmmm. I really need to be taking notes. I so loved the way you described Sesshoumaru. Perfect. Absolutely dead on. That scene with the Kouga and Sess aag wag was a good one too. Liked the way you slipped in their conversation as Kagome was offhandedly listenting. Concerning the scene when Inuyasha barged in on Kagome. I loved it. Very characteristic of him. He is angry at the world it seems. I caught what Inuyasha said about her being a pampered noble woman who has never even lost a......*hair piI goI got the symbolism in that statement and what Inuyasha really meant. You have a veiled way of making the reader quite interested and wanting to know what happens next. Your words flow and the reading is easy.
Hope you do continue with this ancient tale.
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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is so awesome!! *ba da ba ba ba* I'm lovin' it!!! I like the way you've tied this all together...and I can't wait for more soon. 'bout the whole rin and sesshoumaru age bit, it really doesn't matter since he's actually like what...500 years old in the serious?? lol, good job chica, this story is interesting because of how you poy kay kagome's feelings of neutralism...but it won't feel so neutral when she hooks up with my boy inuyasha, now, wil it?? Update soon!!
Ja ne,
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Ja ne,
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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beside the good hearing how did Inuyasha know that Kagome
was taking about him. Unless he was following her. Does he
feel the same things as Kagome? Update soon.
was taking about him. Unless he was following her. Does he
feel the same things as Kagome? Update soon.
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January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to let you know I am really enjoying your story. I'm just a little unsure if the chapters I'm reading on adulfanfiction.net are current. I can never find a date on the stories here. If there are other chapters to this fic somewhere else I would love to know. If not I hope to find some new installments here soon.
Keep up the good work!
Aubrey
Keep up the good work!
Aubrey