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I really like it so far; please update & finish  it soon!!

oh no!!!! I'm a bit of a late bloomer regarding the inuyasha fanfiction, but I'm slowly making my way through the stories! Yours is a gem!!! A diamond amongst so many other stories! I also love how you are taking your time to develop inuyasha and kagome's relationship like another reviewer commented. It makes the story so much deeper. It gives you a chance to truly be drawn in... I'm so disappointed to reach the last chapter before the story was completed!!! Is there any chance that perhaps it was completed on another site you could share with me? Or perhaps you may finish this story after all? I believe you have a true talent for story telling! I am completely in love with how everything has developed up until now!!!
Excellent work!!!

omg

this story is so good
i wish u'd finish it

u have a few typos but its still great

I couldn't help but miss Hojo. I feel sad when you killed him off but I know you had to do it so you can paired Kagome with Inuyasha. Kouga..what to think about him..hmm, let's say that I hate him for cheating on Kagome with Ayame but I wouldn't want Kagome with him anyhow. This is a wonderful read! I hope you update soon. Just simply superb.

the story is great and the idea is unique. i have to admit, kagome is painfully pathetic. T____T where is that kick ass girl.

Hey,
I don't review often, you are only my second review... but I have to say, I love your story, it inspired me to start a pastel drawing, I changed somethings, but it is basically the same... when I started I had you story in mind, and I would like it very much if you would keep righting!
Your Truly,
Candel

Whee!!! I'm so glad you updated! ^^ Sorry, I haven't been around in a while. XP But, I will be, now that things are starting to heat up. That dream seemed like an omen, ne? ;) Great work, as always!

Inuyasha is so in character. I d I do like the way you are going about their relationshimallmall yet incredibly meaningful encounters that convey so much to each other in their reactions. I see symbolism in the doll. good touch. will watch to see
what that symbolism preceeds. With your story's background the way it is, the dinner between Inuyasha and Kagome might
have reprocusions (think I spelled that right). The dream along with the broken doll seemed to be a foreshadowing element.
Broken doll, broken Kagome. I know something rash has to happen for Kouga to let go of Kagome. I felt bad that Rin did not get to see the doll. I liked the chapter. It was good. Your writing style is still top quality with the feel of the chaer ier in the reading. I can still feel every characters emotions. That is great writing. Realistic and you stick honorably to the time period's
social interactions and conditions. Congrats on the chapter. You mentioned it not setting right with you and you to mto make several rewrites. I know how that feels. Even if you decide to change it, I know it will be good.

Thanks for the update. I almost missed it. ^_^.


Ras~~~~~~~~~

I enjoyed this chapter because Kagome and Inuyasha are starting to get a feel for each other.
When will Kagome see her daughter. I hope that Rin does not forget her for being away for so
long. I hope to see the development of Kagome and Inuyasha's relationship and I hope in the near
future Sess will meet or get a glimpse of Rin soon. Update soon.

I'm so so so so so so so happy that u finally updated :). i love this chapter, finally some Kagome/InuYasha togetherness lol. but i can't wait to hear more i'm so excited to hear what's comming up next.