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for Sibling Rivalry

by Tyrinn

person kari
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome!!!
person animechick
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was really good keep going
person Me
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very cool so far
person Sate
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aww very cute already!
person kenji
schedule December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
plz plz plz plz plz dont let is be kag/sess or kag/kouga. kag/inu all the way. the group member she said he tried to kill could be the sango, inuyasha and sango did fight each other when they first met. and it could have been miroku calling kag and inu. im dying over here
person IceBlueRose
schedule November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, I admit that I've never seen this...or erm...read it? I don't even know which one it is! Agh! Either way though, it's a good story and it's gotten me interested. As for whether you can put my story under your recommended readings, no problem. I'm very flatteredt yot you asked! And I'll be looking for an update on this story!
person Kyoto
schedule November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I must say good story so far. But just some frinedly advice from from someone who writes about Inuyasha having a sister. You need to tell people about her past and how she was concived. You know so that way they know how she is connected to him. like i said my character was the product of an affair. Also how did she come to be with Koga's pack? For all know you have a plan to add that in later. I hope i don't sound bitchy. I'm really not! but please continue! I want to know what happens! Huggs:)Kyoto