AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Oswari Means I Love You

by tanuki

person deep serenity
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pretty darn good, I would end it here though, not every story needs to be 20 chaps long

person Megan Consoer
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person aleahas
schedule November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hurray for safe sex...great job
person Mija
schedule November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oooh this was sooooooooo good I luved it..will there be more?? must know..if that was it then by all means it was an awsome short fic but wonderfull and good, but if you continue it would be soo good too..me like this fic and I like the chaps, actually I think in my opinion it should end there..it was perfect and sweet and really good..if you end anywhere it should be there..it was perfect..but if you continue then I will be looking foward to it..smiles...much huggles and smiles Mija..:-)