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for Once Upon a Time...Sugar and Spice

by Haruaka

person Kagomegurl962
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey i like the story for the most part but when and if you make the girls change there minds about the guy you better not put inuyasha and kikyou togethesay say inuasha and kagome all the way.oh yeah and miroku and sango and sesshoumaru and rin too.but still the story is caming along good.
person Tomi
schedule November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That's a pretty good chapter. Could use a bit more paragraph separation though. When's the Kikyo bashing really gonna start? =P
person KARINA
schedule November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!! How could you leave it like that?
Come on more chapters please?
I love it and don't worry abot your gramar its easy to understand.
Please hurr with the next chapter. ^_~
person Laurachan (to lazy to login)
schedule November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I like it very much! PLease, keep it going ^_~
This story will be very interesting!
person Mija
schedule November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh I luv it already I can see all the chaos and fun about to happen..omg this is going to be one great fic soo ummm update soon k?? like ummm NOW...sigh ok I will be patient..but update soon k?? luv it so far very good..huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
person Anon
schedule November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying all of the stories that you have written thus far. Great plots, and I look forward to whatever is coming next. Keep up the good work!
P.S.- I'm also glad that you're sticking to those couples. Those are always the best and generally the most fun and compatible.
person Pyrena Evangelina
schedule November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
love it! keep writing! ^___^ and YAY KIKYO BASHING! *cackles* i think i'm gonna like this fic even more than i already do...XD