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April 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
my goodness...your story is very colorfull...I LIKE IT!
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April 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Iallyally- REALLY REEEEALLY am enjoying this fic. I REALLY hope you update with another chapter. Wow!
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April 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ummmmm... there are alot of ?'S I have about this fic, like who is Houshi and exactly how many children are there? It seems like two once in awhile but then there's another name involved making it seem like three. Also, what happened to Inuyasha? And you need to define the characters more, and not so much killing because then you have the dead characters' names stuck in your head thinking they're still alive and mistaking them for some1 else. The story has a plot, but needs more detail... much more. You also might want to check on the spelling; I think the main reason I'm really confused is that the spelling implies something else, if you know what I mean. But I may be wrong on this whole review completely because I'm only on chapter 5.
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February 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is exellent! ^.^
I don't see how you haven't gotten any reviews on it yet!
I'd love to read more if yave ave it posted on other sites, if not please continue!!
I don't see how you haven't gotten any reviews on it yet!
I'd love to read more if yave ave it posted on other sites, if not please continue!!