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for The Light in a Darkened Heart

by faerie

person Shewny
schedule September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good GET WRITTING
person L.J.
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am not the biggest fan of Kagome in fact I dont Like her at all But I love KOUGA he is my favorite one ot the guys I do however enjoy your story it has a very instering plot and I cant wait to see what happens to these two I hope you continue with this and do not abandon it I hope you do finish it. And maybe next time you can make a Kouga/Sango Or Kouga/Inuyasha LOL (anyone but Kagome) fic for me to enjoy as much as I have enjoyed this one PLease finish L.J
person Nina
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe you finally updated. I'm doing a major happy dance. Thank you. What a hot lemon. Koga's youkai side was great. I think Kagome enjoyed herself, ne. I can't wait for another update.
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finally, a fic where Kagome is neither ruthless nor patronizing in her rejection of Kouga-Kun. Her speech was very in-character. Since this is listed as Kag/Kou I breathlessly await Kagome's realization that she loves Kouga; I just hope he takes her back. Great beginning!
person Belle
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you told me about this because, well, I obviously adore Kouga! I think he would treat Kagome wonderfully if she'd just give him a chance. I wonder when her vision will return to her. I wonder if you will update this. It's a great end jus just knowing that they are mates, but I hope that dream of her with Kouga having the tentacle wust ust a nightmare and no sort of premonition. Dont kill Kouga! It's okay if you kill Yasha though...he's a jerk in this fic. I enjoyed this piece!
person snowfall
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was so intense. May I say, you are an excellent writer. Thank Nina for recommending this story to me. It will help in my own process of learning to write well.
Thanks again!
person Ice Princess
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap. This. is. the. hottest. lemon. I've. ever. read. Anyone out there looking for something smoldering, erotic, a wee bit kinky, and just plain hot, I implore you. READ THIS NOW!!!!
person Anon
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it. There aren't that many Kouga/Kagome combinations out there which I think is a shame. My only real question is if Kagome is going to get her sight back and when. I can see how having to focus on her other senses will help her powers develop, but being blind can still be a sever handicap.

Otherwise, keep it up!
person Melissa
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks!!!
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww-ies! I found some errors, but overall it was goo good. It was sweet, and I enjoyed it, but it made me want to kill that bastard and his clay whore.