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for Foever Love

by AngeryFlame

person nightmareofcat
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ok only one thing to say TYPE IN ENGLISH!!! i cant tell what this says and use a spell cher sor something
person animechick262003
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
all I can say is WTF!!!!! did you mean to do that. Skarid!!! Skarid!!!! Thats not a word!!! *Shakes head* Please update soon!! o__O;


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person stayingput29
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well to be gentle I can only say .... WTF!!!!.....It was way to short and the spelling was so off the wall I had to read twice just to understand that Sehumaryu was a God not a Good and who the hell is Kagumi....and what is scruumin is there some kind of hidden meaning behind these words or do u just need a dictionary... because they have them on line... and I was also wandering are u going to leave them in the future or taking them back thu the well..... Or are u just going to let them fight and Inuyasha fall out again.... I am soooooo curious as to see where u will be taking this next to even with the bad grammer i will keep an eye on the updates....
person arianna
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
erm...Was the bad spelling and horrid grammar on purpose just to screw with people, or are you really that ignorant?
person Rockin Dave
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS THE BEST DAMN KAGOME SESS FIC I HAVE READ!!! LOL!!! GOOOD GODS U SUMED UP THE WHOLE TIRESOME STROY PLOT IN ONE CHAPTER>> LMAO!!! UPDATE SOON THIS FIC IS HILARIOUS!!
person Reiku
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Spell check is your friend.
person kenji
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is the best kag/sess fic i've r (wh (what does that tell u about the others ones) INU/KAG FOREVER
person applejacks
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG-- Are you 8 or something? My 7 yr old cousin can spell and write better than this!
Word of advice, get a donaronary or use spell check. Then readers won't get headaches from trying to decipher this piece of dribble because it's so horribly written.
person MysticInca
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Erm? Do you speak English?? Was this a parady? I'm really confused. The spelling and grammer was so horrible that I really had no idea what was going on. If your native language isn't English, then I think you better find a beta or a really good english spell checker. If you can speak english, take this down, proof read and try again.