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November 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AngeryFlame I am willing to help with the spelling and grammer if you would like. I enjoy the story but it is quite difficult to read due to the spellind gnd grammer. I am not sure if you speak English or are trying to translate from a foriegn language. Either way I am willing to help you if you want, though it may take me a little time due to workload and such. Let me know.
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November 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ummmmmmmmmmm? i'm glad you're joking... tell me you're joking...
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November 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LMAO.... this is way to funny.... I love it... sooo U are a person with a sence of humor well YIPEEEE!!!!!.... and having three baby's to funny... I must say I really find this funny I have to guess at some of the words and figure out what U are trying to say but it makes my brain work over time.... He He...was was just wandering how that erm is doing of Sess's and I love the pairing the Hick pairing.... Rid'em cowgirl....lmao.... to funny at first I really didn't understand but I think I may be catching on and Yes i will continue to keep an eye on updates and I am FOR SURE gg itg it five stars.... Thanks for the laughs my head is in a spin now... and my sides hurt like they havn't hurt in days.... So my Hat is off to ya and I hope everyone else can catch the humor in this for I think it is sad if they do not..... Go Angry.... Let'em have it....MULES
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November 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
not to be too ofensive, but you should be a le moe more careful wwritwriting with spelling and grammar. half of the first chapter is one big spelling or gramerical mistake, and the other half doesn't make much sence because of the other errors. please look over your chapters before you post. it helps to read them out loud with some one.
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November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Go away Troll. If this isn't a Troll and this the depths of your shallow intellect, then I truly pity you. A braindead goldfish writes more coherently that you.
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November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this Fic!!! Best damn Sess kag ever LMAO!!! I read yur reviews and I get the humor in all of this. This shyt is funny Please update soon!!!!! I swear you have my side hurting from laughing so hard. And dont be disheartened by those who cant see the humor in this ,I get the joke and Please keep Going this shyt is FUNEH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^________________________^
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November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Holy Freaking Crap......it was hilarious to read the reviews....funny stuff. All in all........WHAT THE HELL WERE YOU THINKING? I had to read the newspaper so I could get this horrible grammer out of my head....I think it increased my stupidity just by reading it......*shudders*
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November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You really, really, REALLY need to get a beta reader
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November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Spam is good on crackers but not AFF.net.. Get lost idiot. Yes, someone of your intellegect is considered an idiot.
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November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OK What the fuck? The only thing I can figure out is you're either on drugs or you're a moron. Don't give up your day job, if you have one. In all seriousness, if this is meant as a joke it's in very poor taste, if not then you need to invest in a word processor with spell checking and grammer checking and attend remedial english. If english is not your native language, you need to write the story in your native language and have it translated, because as it stands now this thing is a piece of dreck.