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okay, that had to be one of the most horrifying fanfics I have ever laid my eyes upon. SERIOUSLY LEARN HOW TO SPELL AND IF YOU KNOW THAT YOUR WORK IS TOTAL AND UTTER CRAP THEN DO NOT, I repeat... DO NOT POST IT ON THE INTERNET FOR OTHERS TO READ THIS WAS ABSOLUTELY HORRIBLE AND I AM SURE THAT I WILL SPEND THE REST OF THIS EVENING SCOURING MY EYES WITH LYE AND ANTI-STUPID SOAP TO CLEANSE IT FROM THE TRASH THAT I JUST READ. -_- I read the reviews to this story before I tried to read this garbage you call a story and after reading their feedback I just had to see for my self how idiotic and stupid the story actually was and frankly I agree with everyone that said that this story was trash. And to those that think that this "story" was actually something worth reading and that it was good. YOU HAVE NO IDEA WHAT A GOOD STORY IS THEN! This fanfic looks like it was written by some drunk crack induced monkey with a keyboard and a hammer! WTF WERE YOU THINKING YOU DAMN MORON!

In all honesty I can't say that I am sorry for this flame or that I am sorry for anything I said But I do have some advice for you:
1) Learn how to spell properly and learn grammer
2) Find out how to spell the characters names that you are using
3) Get a beta reader or at least use spell check
4) Read over your work. If you can't understand what is going on in the story, your readers can't either
5) and finally, please for the love of god and all the kami in the universe, never ever write another story this bad again please!

~~Soubi_Shoukyaku~~

Generally I'm not one to leave negative comments on people's stories especially seeing as how as an author I know how hurtful it can be...But you are DESPERATELY in need of a beta. I'm not quite sure, if you speak English or if ebonics has just tainted your spellng beyond belief, but frankly this story was just UNREADABLE. I had no idea what you were trying to get across half the time, and the other half I had to spend so much time deciphering what you meant I just about gave up. I would say do a repost with a good deal of spell checking. But yes, I'm also contemplating your age range, as it seems a little... Well... Surface level. Good try though, better luck next time.

This may be a good story, but please just spell check...or get a beta or something there are words in here that don't show up in any dictionary.

What is this? There are so many spelling mistakes in there. I didn't make it past the first chapter before wanting to turn away.

wow that's bad english

I tried, I really tried to read your story. I just could not get over the sheer number of typos. You may want to go back over this.

Look not to be mean or anything but u have to learn to spell. You spelt Sesshomaru's name wrong and Kagome's name wrong. Learn how to spell and then write again

Thanks to you, skarid is my new favorite word! Anyways, this could be a great story if you cleaned up the spelling/grammar a LOT and maybe added some more to the storyline. A good first attempt, especially if you're not familiar with the English language (doesn't seem so....) Keep trying!

For the love of god! get a beta reader!!

LOL....what the heck!! Sure, I had a great time trying to figure out what some of the words are and names, but really!!! Please get a beta reader!!!!