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for Winter Hearts

by scarredbride

person Reiku
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. I'm not big on stories where the rape victum falls for attacker... but it seems to work for this story. Mainly because she doesn't 'love' him she was simpily seduced by him. It should take a very very long time for her to fall in love with him if ever. The only thing I ask is that Kagome doesn't suddenly become a youkai or hanyou because of recieving Sesshou's blood.. I think that would ruin this story completely.. at least for me. Youkai are not vampires=) If it where that easy for someone to become demonized.. why on earth would Inuyasha/Naraku bother looking for the shards of the Shikon when they could just drink the blood of a youkai. Keep it up.. this is one of the few stories I check daily to see if its updated.
person HeartlessEnchantress
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM

scarredbride,

^.~ Heya there! I read your story and just loved it! Were both such angsty writers! *Smiles proudly* I am slightly jealous however, about how you can change the cruel Sesshoumaru, into something a little softer without throwing your story off balance, and without making Sesshoumaru out of character! Hope you write more soon, I am on the edge of my wooden seat *winces* dieing to know what’s going to happen! I feel horrible for Inuyasha by the way! I Love it when authors don’t make him into a two-timing, dense jerk!

-HeartlessEnchantress
person RED DAY
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Salmons..really!!! Send in the sharks!!! (hehehe!!!!) Ok back to being serious, how could U make us wait so long! Ok enough of that! The fic just keeps getting better and better! U know, Inuyasha is acting hurt (I guess he probably is seeing Sess will be with her in the end unless she wishes on the jewel for him to come back), but Im just wondering since Sess really doesn't have a fixation on the jewel and looks down on those that do how in this world would Kag convince him to go after the jewel. Oh, and what happens if she gets pregnant, will Sess kill her or wait until the child is born and kill it??? Because Sess is very self center on himself to the extent of im not sure if love is possible, Is love possible with him??? Well what ever, I know U will lure us in YOU SHARK HUNTER!!!
person snowcat
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Note to Anyone reading reviews for this fic; this story has 55 great reviews at FF.net !!
Also would like to boost the Author, Has me VEXED! Have this page on my Favorites list. Borderline too dark in begining chapters for me, but trust it will only serve to enhance the direction of your plot.
person blacka
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
don´t say that your story is boring... It´s cool. Please update soon!!
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
woohoo reviews!
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hmm....anyone know how to check the reviews without leaving one?