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by scarredbride

person snowcat
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Now We're Gett'n Somewhere! Could Naraku have struck alty lty nerve asking Sessh if Kagome "screamed like that for him"? HMMM...I think Sessh is making a mistake not entering her dreams...now's his chance to persuade her closer to him, by encouraging to her rest, feel safe and heal...before InuYash has a chance to remind her of her feelings of betrayal .
person snowcat
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Now We're Gett'n Somewhere! Could Naraku have struck a "guilty" nerve in Sessh when he asked if ..."she screamed like that for him"? HMMM... Sessh shouldn't wait to enter her dreams. Now's the time to persuade her closer to him, by getting to her with encouraging words for her to rest, feel safe and heal...before InuYasha has a chance to remind her of her feelings of betrayal.

And Kudos to anyone who can still write/update so quickly with a HEAD cold!
person snowcat
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
whoops! Sorry for the twins. Having server problems.
person HeartlessEnchantress
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM

Scarredbride,

Very nice job on the lemon! Definitely some of your best work. ^.~ I have to admit.. I’m dieing to find out what happens with Naraku, so
keep up your fast paced updating! Loved the chapter, glad to see your keeping up the good work!
-HeartlessEnchantress
person HeartlessEnchantress
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM

Scarredbride,

Very nice job on the lemon! Definitely some of your best work. ^.~ I have to admit.. I’m dieing to find out what happens with Naraku, so
keep up your fast paced updating! Loved the chapter, glad to see your keeping up the good work!
-HeartlessEnchantress
person Aira^o^
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have to agree with you this chapter is good!!! But please .. whatever will happen next.. don't let Naraku no baka get his ways!!!
person nightmareofcat
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
love it update soon
person snowcat
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
!!!*DROOLS*!!! Is the story bending into a war between two evils? I'm hoping you don't pick Naraku as the better evil, and give reasons for Kagome to keep some lingering fear of Sessh if you chose him as the evil "hero". But then again, I probably will be vexed by your story no matter where it leads.

Thanks for prompt updating too!
person blacka
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
the lemon was really really sweet... how cute.
good job! Update soon!
person HeartlessEnchantress
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Scarredbride,

You update unbelievably fast! I’m not quite sure how you do it and still manage to make wonderful chapters, but congratulations! Hope you feel better soon, sleep and chicken noodle soup are the best remedies for colds!
-HeartlessEnchantress