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for Twisted Love

by scarredbride

person EmberSama
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'd have to say that this was one of the best fan fictions that I have ever read. Chapter 11 I think...Which ever one in which Sesshomaru took his son...made me cry. You are a very talaneted writer and i plan on reading the rest of your work.
person The Empress
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoo! I almost forgot to review. Anyways, incest....ewwww. But oh well. T_T I loved your story. Now I'm going to read more of your stories. Bye now. ^_^
person Jourdan
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Seshoumaru is so sweet and gentle, well, for now anyway.
person No Sugar Added (not signed in)
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Never let me get within 10 miles of you because I will probably kill you. That was so unfair! (Of course, this is coming fa dia diehard Sess/Kag fan so don't listen to me.) Ergh. Inu-Yasha isn't supposed to win!

Gah. I want to hate this story but I can't...it was good. Keep writing!
person akuma_river
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know about the twins with different fathers thing is uncommon but it does happen. Sperm can live up three weeks in the uterus but can only copulate with eggs for about a day or two since the release. So there have been cases where simular things have happened. One case I know of is a women who was three months pregnant with twins when she got pregnant again. Strange but true. Gosh it hurts to be a female. Good story.
person Rose
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the story! I enjoyed it, even if I wanted Sesshoumaru to get Kagome. Since no one else hantiontioned it, I thought I's tell you that it wouldn't require any magic at all for Kagome to have fraternal twinth dth different fathers! It's really happened with humans and it's no big mystery. I'm come across it in medical texts. It's fairly common with other animals that have multiple births and go into heat, so they have sex with several males in a short span of time, such as cats and...dogs! ;)
person Tanya
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! I'm back! Er... huh? lol. Anyhow, great job! *mutters something about spider youkai* Sequel!!!! Yes! I think that a sequel is in order! Ahh, if you'd like yon usn use my OC... er, that is, when you beta read! ^^' *starts chanting* Squel, sequel, sequel... Gha, yes, my spelling is horribly off... I'm tired! Ja! ^o^ Tanya
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
more reviews!! YAY
person Mija
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooooh that was an awsome and totally great fic! I loved it and I cried when Sesshy took the baby..awwwwwww sniffles and ooh please do a sequel to this, it would be soo cool to find each other, Imean the twins..lol..and thier adventures and the reunion of the parents perhaps??? anyway great fived ved it..huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
person wyrm of souls
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow...good story! i hope there will be a sequal! i was thinking that too, what if they come across eachother and fall in love...that would be rather interesting...dude...very interesting, if a little sick...yeah, the first thing i thought when kagome said they shouldnt tell her she had a brother was 'Edipus Rex'...did i spell that right? anywho, yeah, that has all the makings of a greek tragedy...write a sequal soon! i cried over the whole sesshy thing, but i wanna see what happens! go write! :D