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October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
O.o... WOW... Whoa was it? Kikyou or Kagome? (please! let it be Kikyou!)
Excelent Lemon...
... I think I need a really cold shower now............ Ou. That's scary!!!!
Excelent Lemon...
... I think I need a really cold shower now............ Ou. That's scary!!!!
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October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hmm. That was interesting. I believe you were writing Kagome, and not Kikyou. Honestly, I don't like the last paragraph, but I am also a hopeless romantic. I think you should go a little further into Inu Yasha's reaction. (this is not a flame, it is my opinion, and that is what reviews are for right? to let the author know your opinion)
Other than that last paragraph, I liked the rest of the fic, thought it was well written.
k read ya later! Oh, and have a safe n happy Halloween.
Other than that last paragraph, I liked the rest of the fic, thought it was well written.
k read ya later! Oh, and have a safe n happy Halloween.