rate_review Reviews

who were you thinking i was thinking kagome but deep down i was hoping it was kikyo since i'm not really fond of her character.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Wow! I always like a good Dark one shot. But I seriously do think that you were thinking of Kagome when you wrote this story, as much as I would have wanted it to be Kikyou. I mean Kikyou is cold, calculated and calm. She would never scream, “Please. Please let me go. I beg you!” That is just so out of character. And I'm pretty sure you, as an author, were going for the in character view. You hit Naraku on the nail. But that last paragraph, you kind of start to wonder if it was Kagome or Kikyou who, in fact, got raped. Anyways it was a very good read.

KIKYOU KIKYO KIKYOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What a way to go.

wheew! that was sexy. i love sex and death. what a sexy way to die... haha awesome fic

AWESOME!!! Very dark... I love you!!! hehehehe....

huh. well...you know, that last comment that you threw in there, about who was it is a real great psychological babbler. the whole time i looked at teh incident as Kagome, even after she passed. yet as you wrote in InuYasha wondering how he could ever love someone like that, i felt a pang of complete anger in my heart for the wrong doing. yet reading your footnote, i instantly was ready to proclaim, hey, it was kikyo so its OKAY. that made me sit back and think. GREAT dark lemon and psychological tagline. wow...you really got my mind going on that one.

Ohh..wow..dark…I loved it!!
Great job on writing this!! You are one of my favorite author!!

Not a flame, but you are sick. No one enjoys being raped.