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by SnowySilence

person Katzztar
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Let me guess Ayla is a hanyou, fathered by Sesshoumaru. If Kagome was gone for 6 years then Ayla should be just over 5 yrs old, giving 9 months for Kagome's pregnancy.


Hehe Inuyasha's going to FLIP! Well, he should have never compared Kagoem to Kikyo. Hmm I wonder what Sesshoumaru's reaction will be? I mean it WAS only 3 months ago he had the tryst with Kagome and now he has a 5 year old daughter.
person Katzztar
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about that review posting three time -_- *mutters about stupid button sticking*

I had a thought about Ayla. She would have the same problem as Inuyasha with her demon blood.

Inuyasha's problem comes from the fact that Hhis father's demon blood is so powerful and his human mother was powerless. So Inuyasha's demon blood overwhelmed the human blood.

Sesshoumaru is powerful but nowhere near his father's level and Kagome is not powerless, she is quite powerful (even if she was untrained as a teen). So therefor Ayla would not have the same problem as Inuyasha.....right?
person wyrm of souls
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
o goody! i bet inuyasha will love this! i wanna see what happens, write more! soon! i hate fics where they go through the whole pregnancy with her...boring as all hell...this is good! i wonder what fluffy will do when he finds out? :P MORE!!!!!!!
person CybrEmly01
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More please?
Pretty please? *flutters eyelashes*

lol, like that actually works.
person kenji
schedule October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
im a big inuyasha/kagome fan, so i didnt enjoy this too much. but you say you are writing more lemons, so im hoping for inu/kag ones