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by SnowySilence

person jezzica
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow.....that was an ending i was NOT expecting. And that is what made it so good. I didnt like how much you changed Kagome though. If shes a mom then i would think her hair would be liker her own moms withouht the red and stuff in it. But its a good change non the less. I hope you update very soon and when you do please email me so i could check it out. Thankies. And i give you 10!! and 2 thumbs up!!
person jezzica
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh and PS.
Make it a Sesshoumaruome ome fic. It would be so cool for him to sofen and take responsiblility for his child and rin would have a sister *squeee* I love this fic btw did I alredy tell you that?
person fyyrrose
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*cough* REALLY good! I had NO clue that your story was going in *this* direction! Very awesome! Can't wait to read more! Please update VERY soon!

Fyyrrose
person Ravenqt
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was very good would you please plz fh ith it pppppppppplllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaassssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeee
person bo-chan
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Keep doing. I vote sess/kag.
person 4inu
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
inu shouldnt want her skanky butt after she has slept with his brother. If he still wants her that shows how weak a man he is and I just dont see him being that weak or wanting his brothers sloppy seconds!!!


person laDY SARAH
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow yeah i wasnt expecting that update soon it is a really good story
person kenji
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i thought u said there was a inu/kag pairing here. im assuming that daughter is sesshoumaru's right?
person Katzztar
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Let me guess Ayla is a hanyou, fathered by Sesshoumaru. If Kagome was gone for 6 years then Ayla should be just over 5 yrs old, giving 9 months for Kagome's pregnancy.


Hehe Inuyasha's going to FLIP! Well, he should have never compared Kagoem to Kikyo. Hmm I wondhat hat Sesshoumaru's reaction will be? I mean it WAS only 3 months ago he had the tryst with Kagome and now he has a 5 year old daughter.
person Katzztar
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Let me guess Ayla is a hanyou, fathered by Sesshoumaru. If Kagome was gone for 6 years then Ayla should be just over 5 yrs old, giving 9 months for Kagome's pregnancy.


Hehe Inuyasha's going to FLIP! Well, he should have never compared Kagoem to Kikyo. Hmm I wonder what Sesshoumaru's reaction will be? I mean it WAS only 3 months ago he had the tryst with Kagome and now he has a 5 year old daughter.