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for Overwhelming Desire

by Lease242

person Michi-chan
schedule October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
If you don't continue, I will cry. T_T
person Seth
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I hope you continue this story. This is a very good beginning to something even better. Please continue, I really look forward to reading more of this story.
Later...
person Garr
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
come on now where's the rest?
person Laydhwk
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh My!! So far so good! I like your style of writing. Also, your approach to the whole Kagome/Sesshomaru relationship....nice beginning 'angle', or I guess 'set-up' would be a better word. Anyway!.....looking forward to more from you!
person Lynn
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I Liked the pro. It was vary good. i just hope you had put more up and please do keep with it even if it is a time user to wast all the other hours of the day. i hope you punothnother chaptuer up soon.
person RekkaShinen
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
If you could space your paragraphs out that would make this really great!! I really want to see what happens with everyon Ple Please update soon.
person KhellendrostheDragon
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow,what a beginning!can't wait for more,plz update soon.
person nightmareofcat
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh come on keep it going! YOU GO GIRL! lol please update soon
person JOler
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love the beginning...hope to see more soon