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December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hehee, Loved it. A little different with the type of sexual descriptions for me, but it works for you. I totally felt the heat going on there and lets just say... hmmm... damn... lol I want Sesshy so bad right now and want him to do that to me! *sighs* Unfortunately he isn't real, but hey I can still dream. LOL. Anyway, just wanted to review and say congrats on another great lemon.
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December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
(Fans self) Few! that was intense! man! you're good at writing lemons! i can't wait read more! Keep writing honey! (Hands a box of cookies) Here, you deserve these! Man! that was wild! Great job babe!
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December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok this is a really good story, but you need a beta-reader. You go from 3rd person point-of-view to 1st with out a little note or anyt say saying who it is, which isn't so bad until you start trying to do 1st person point-of-view for both charac at at the same time and that gets really confusing.
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December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is tochy chy no romance
i mean it is ok but still
i guess im just a romantic at heart
i like the whole i love you thing
and speaking in the first person is ok
i guess i just didn't like this chapter
oh well it was well written but i just don't like it
i mean it is ok but still
i guess im just a romantic at heart
i like the whole i love you thing
and speaking in the first person is ok
i guess i just didn't like this chapter
oh well it was well written but i just don't like it
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December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!! FINALLY!!!!!! Thank you for updating youory.ory. It is/was very good.
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow what an overwhelming seen. It was very well detailed. It was a little slow to start off but you madefor for that nicely
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
O___O wow............-twitch- that was interesting....................yet I liked it......indeed I liked a lot, good job!!
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December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow... Amazing write... Just utterly amazing...
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December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
update your atroy, WITH A NEW CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!! it's annoying when i think that there might be a new chapter everytime i see your story and theres not. just update the god damned thing!!!
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December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Everytime I see your story at the top of the page, I believe you have added another chapter. Now I keep seeing it over and over and over and over. I understand the importance of editing but this is getting ridiculous. My impression is that you make one small change just so that your story appears at the top of the list. I am not for for flaming but this is getting fucking stupid. Either add another chapter, do less updates or delete the damn story.