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for Seducing The Crowd

by Crazysexycool

person Tabbi
schedule December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i think you should because its what they are its strange when there not what there supposed to be
person goldmund
schedule December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i would prefer them not be youkais in the fic. it would be little too odd in it since all these chapters so far are very human-based world. i think that such surreal element would take away from the plot.
person Marieka
schedule December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I love the characters the way they are. If you wanted to make them demons I think someone already pointed out that Sess would know by her sent that Kag and Siren were one n' the same, but she could be disguising her sent with perfume ;) I know big help I am *sigh* Whatever you do just keep writing. I cant wait to read S'more!
person shina
schedule December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think it might be kind of cool, but remember this is AU and from what you have so far I don't think it would fit too well... also if Sess was a youkai he would know Kagome and Siren are the same because of scent.
person Feylin
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I throughly enjoy reading your story, its awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter, its driving me crazy! Your style is so fresh, its great and I hope you update soon!




Loving it,
Feylin
person dragonflyelj
schedule December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think you should leave them as humans. The setting you have them is is a total AU, so they don't need to be youkai. And I think it would just distact the story. Plus if they were youkai, then Sess would already know that both Kagome and (Siren? I have to look again) were the same person. Plus then you have to deal with the whole I'm a youkai, youkai are better than humans side of Sess.
person Rem
schedule December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yukia! ok thats spelled wrong. Oh well can u email me when u update plz?
person Angelbratt
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yes I think Sess should remain youkai.
person heninu
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yes i thnik you should make them (i can't spell it) demons. I personlally always like it when they are. But your story is so good i dnot think it will really matter.
person Miyu
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great story. and yes. you should make them youkai and hanyou