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by Clockworkknight

person Mija
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooh your latest chap was soooooo good..he told her he loves her..and it must mean he doesnt hate her or feel bitterness towards her like he had earlier, I hope he heard her own vows oflove as well..and feels them deep in his heart..oooh again this was an awsome chapter I soo love your writing and your detail your a wondefull writer..hope to see anohter update soon much huggles adn smiles your fan Mija..:)
person tigers_eye
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet. I could kiss you for updating; I was starting to get worried you'd abandoned this story. Can't wait till you get to the point where Naraku gets IY (that's where this is heading, right?). Have read your other stories, as well. I think this &, consequently Missing by association, are the best, followed by that new one, Shattered. The ones w/ Miroku are not my forte, so I refrain from commenting. Anyway, look forwardnextnext update.
person nokomarie
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yea! Finally something's going in the right direction. A bit of fully consentual sex between lovers would be a nice switch from all the hanyou abuse. Poor thing.
person tigers_eye
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What is going thru Naraku's mind, hm? While Naraku is a sadistic bastard, in this case, I'd give him a Bronze Star for strangling that rogue exterminator. Asshole deserved it!
person kenji
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that demon exterminator should have gotten it worse. narkau should of brought him back to life with a shard and make him his slave, ala kohaku, and rape him. great fic.
person tigers_eye
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please! PLEASE! PLEASE tell me you are going to continue this!! I think I've read thru it 3 times now! You have got me aus aus as hell as to what is going to happen. Update soon, pleeeeease!
person Loki*-*TheGrimScreamer
schedule December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Tbiatbiatch is so freakin' dead. grr.
person Loki*-*TheCrimScreamer
schedule December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Eyew, Naraku wants InuYasha......
My poor little Inu..............
person Loki*-*TheGrimScreamer
schedule December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm addicted to this fic...........
person Loki*-* The Grim Screamer
schedule December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WHERE THEL ISL IS KAGOME?! THE FUCKING BITCH!!! SHE'D BETTER GET HER ASS BACK HERE!!!

MIROKU IS BEING A BETTER FRIEND THAN SHE IS!!!!

THE FUCKING STUPID CONNIVING WHINY LITTLE BITCH!!!!

O.O

Erm, uh, good fic! ^-^;;