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*Blink blink stare* Holy living hell!! Damn that was dark!! Then it was hot, then it was dark!! I love it!! I read all 14 chapters in one sitting. I couldn’t leave the story.. I would walk away for a few minutes, and like a drug it called to me. Definitely going on recommended reading!! The story flowed beautifully!! Good job!! You inspired me to go back to work on my own dark fic...I feel the need to hurt something...hahaha!! o,0'

i love this one! gloomy nad sinister and equally full of rape, anyway i'm glad Kagome and Inuyasha are finally together.hope you'll continue

Hey, it's me again. I'm so in love with this story that I decided to review it here too. If I haven't told you before it rocks! I really love dark fics but I also am crazy about Inuyasha and Kagome. So, please, make things good for them in the end. I beg you! You do whatever you want with them, especiallth Ith Inuyasha ;), but please let them be together in the end. Update soon!

What do you mean TBC?! I was hoping for a new chapter NOW! :) Anyway, read the teaser for Arrows Will Fall (think that was the title) & have just a couple of things to watch out for, because they are annoying, and please understand, it isn't just you; I've seen this problem w/ other fics on this site, as well: "bound" is when you tie or restrain someone/thing; "bonds" is another way to refer to the restraints used. Also, watch the tense used, as I've seen you switching between past (ex: he was) & present (ex: he is) within the same paragraph. Sorry if I'm being a pain, but these little things affect the flow of a story, acting like potholes in a road. Anyway, can't wait for that new chapter; you are driving me nuts with this. :)

Hi, CK! You know I love your story. I haven't disappeared - I've tried to e-mail you several times and I get it back as undeliverable. This is the only way I know to get in touch with you!

Beth

ok the story was great at first but now the gay things is getting a bit otta hand..... like come on ewwww... but you write well just try and not go in that direction....

It's been quite a while since you updated. Really need a new chapter. Don't think that just because there have been no reviews since Feb., no one is reading this. I know I, myself, read quite a few stories w/o leaving a review, sometimes because of time constraints; sometimes, just forgetful. Anyway, this ne one of the best stories on this site, so I'd desperately like to see if continued. Thanks.

Another nice chapter. The love scene between IY & Kagome was so beautiful, I nearly cried. Just a couple of criticisms, nothing major: watch you spelling & grammer. While reading, I ran across a couple of spelling and/or grammer errors. Also, I wouldn't use "as" so much as a sentence connector. It leads to run-on sentences. It's better just to break what you're trying to say into smaller sentences. That way, I think you'll have a better flow to the story. If you're not sure what I'm talking about, read some books you enjoy & watch how the paragraphs & sentences are actually written. You'll kind of feel a flow to the words.

Hey I like to see a scene in which Naraku has Kanna pleasure him

*bows to the author* Wonderful story! What an interesting departure from the usual Inu-gumi fiction. I think people can easily forget that
a strong male character can just as easily be a victim as a female one. We all have our flaws, weaknesses, drives, obsessions, and strengths, including Inu Yasha. Its nice too see him portrayed as less...indestructable. Thank you again for your wonderful story,
and I hope to see more in the future!