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for Aburana

by DelKaidin

person Elizabeth (yes, me. Again.)
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
... I really love your writing... You really got the idea and reactions down.... And the reader can really understand the character's feelings... I'm feeling rather stupid tonight, don't mind me.... And, uh.... update?
person ME
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, very sweet and you made me cry again >.< I hate to cry but, your fic...I can't stop reading it--Inu is so sweet--emotional, caring, understanding, and compassionate--everything I always knew he'd be. update soon!
person ME
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, very sad. I cried as I read it, especially Inu's reaction--since you rarely see his softer emotions. Poor Kagome--she'll need Inu and everyone to help her through this--I'm anxious to see how you develop this as I'm sure I'll cry some more>.< Hopefully there will be a 'happy ending'--after all they've been through, that is one couple who deserves it! update soon.
person Rasberries
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I was curious about the title so decided to investigate. Great story so far. So many emotions. I like the flow. Realistic and simple. Will await the update. Ras. ^_^
person megh
schedule October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is workinginto a great fic. And your right: rape doesn't go away after a few days. It's good to read a fic that realizes that.
person Mija
schedule October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh another wonderfull yet sad chapter..poor kagome..sniffles...please continue with this story I want to know where it leads and how it ends..if ever..(smiles) the pain eventually goes away...anyhow it was a great chap..huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
person Jenice
schedule October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very poweful hope it ends with K and I getting together
person Katzztar
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for creating this dark tale, it is far past time someone wrote an accurate story of what rape can do to a person.

I see these insipid sumarries similar to= "Seshou rau rapes Kagome, inuyasha treats her differently and she runs away, Who does she run ? a ? a Sess/Kag romance"

Talk about dumb, there is no romance in rape! I refuse to click on such stories that think you fall ine wie with your rapist. That's bull!

So far this is only story that shows the dark after effects a raped woman goes through that I've come across.
Please do continue, there are some majorly dumb peolpe that need a wake up call.
person ApriL
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
damn those piLLs...damn the rapist. get inu-yasha to kick his ass! eh...don't mind me. Update soon pLease =]
person Carrie
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That....is so sad, but unfortunatly true. I have a friend who was raped. It happened before I met her, but she got into doing alot of drugs after it happened. Luckly, though, she has been clean for three years and is engaged to be married. I know it still hurts becasue it happened by someone she knew and she never told her parents or reported it. I hate how some rape victims are treated. They are looked upon by some people for something that they never wanted and more than not the the victims are put on trial and their assailents are realeased and get off scott free. It's sick. Things need to change. I love how you are writing this story. It shows a more accurate protrayl of what actually happens than what is usually seen.