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for Aburana

by DelKaidin

person HMPrune
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very powerful story - you write a very sad story well .
person New Fan
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What is he wanting for. Does he hope that the person that hurt Kagome will return. I do not know if this story will have that situation occur, but it will be great to know who has hurt Kagome. Update soon.
person KagoKitty
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good story!!! Very unique and unusually sweet...
person shayshay-sama
schedule December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is really sad and touching. It also makes you think about this sort of thing happening to other people. I really liked the way you set it up and made the emotions feel so real. Is there going to be more? or was that the end? oh please dont let it be the end!!!!
person weijaa
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
If you do not update.......soon.....I will sic my army of killer ferrets on you!!!!
person shina
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a really powerful story and I would like to thank you for writting it. It is very good and filled with the real emotions of the situation.
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Best chapter yet, very moving, powerful, and acutely realistic. Applause to a job very well done. Ras.
person michelle
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i really lie your fanfic. Its quite touching and sad. Me and my friend are constently looking to see if you have updated evere wee we are online. please keep writing! i am so anxious to see what happens. on hte last chapter you sorta left us hangin (chapter 5)
faithful reader
mish
person aleahas
schedule November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think the only thing I can say is thank you...I'll be waiting for the next chapter
person faerie
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is so sad. You are doing such a wonderful job with this. Update soon!!