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You had a good story going here, you really should update again. I also wrote a fanfiction (not inuyasha) dealing with rape and I know how hard it is to write about. You're really doing a great job so please update soon.

This is very powerful and well written. Please continue.

Hey, i really loved your fic, but i'm dieing to know what happens next. I hope we get to see more of inuyasha and kagome together. ;) So, I really hope you update soon.

I read several of your stories. While I liked all of them quiet well, in my opinion this is your best piece of writing by far. The characters aret rit right and their emotions are portrayed very intensely and realistically. For example I liked to see Inuyasha and Hojo not fighting, but actually working together for Kagome's sake. And I appreciate to finally read a story that treats rape as the crime it is, not some plot element to play with. Even though it's only fiction, it makes me swallow hard to see stories in which a person is rapedlls lls in love with her attacker the next day and they live happily ever after. You manage to show that it effects the victim deeply and not only her, but also the one's who care for her. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Thank you. I'm glad someone has finally recognized how serious rape really is. I'm especially thankful that you put in Inuyasha's speech to Kagome's would-be second rapist, about how would he like it if it was his mother, or sister. Again, thank you.

I hope this isn't finished. I want more of this story. I don't know what there is about it that I like so much. I can't put my finger on it. All I know is that I have not diskliked any of your writings. I have really enjoyed this story!

I read this about a week ago, but the site wouldn't let me review it! Hope this one goes through! *Grrr...* Those boys.....glad both Hojo and Inuyasha were there to help out Kagome! I hope this doesn't affect her recovery too much, and she gets better with each passing day; and Inuyasha is there to help her - along with Hojo and her school friends and family! More soon! ^_^

Very well done . . . it's nice to see a story where a rape isn't all "oh well, it's over, nothing I can do about it, life goes on and I'm in love with InuYasha." You've pulled the mind trauma off very well, and I can't wait to read more.

I've only read some of it, I am saving the rest to read later but you got off to a great start once agian. It was quite clever and a good step in hte story for you to have someone else threaten her. Though i must admit hte dog whistle...was quite odd...btu it works ^^;;. well keep going! I cant wait to read more!

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One word.Cool.