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for Aburana

by DelKaidin

person New Fan
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I hope that you will be writing more on this story. Please update soon.
person zelix
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you're continuing this, i know it must be rather hard to write this fic, i could never do something like this... Exellent work and i hope you get more written soon, i really do.
person Hanyou_Kagome
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I look forward to updates from this story. I have been following it for a while, I apologize for not reviewing sooner but I do not have a very good internet connection, I get dced alot ^^ But I enjoyed this story very much, it is true to character and I find the reality of it all to be very truthful. You are a good writer, I like alot of your other work ^^ Please update
person Interested Reader
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad to see you update this story. I had emailed you a few months ago and you were kind enough to let me know that you would come back to Aburana in time and I thank you. I hope to see more updates soon because you are creating a wonderful story here. I have cringed at stories that have Kagome panting after Inuyasha within hours of being raped and it is so comforting to see someone handle this type of story with sensitivity and grace. Thank you and I eagerly await more.
person shaina
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad that you have continued the story. I wondered what was going to happen next. Your story is so truthful and real. I'm glad that you won that award. You deserve it.
person Jaganshi-Kyou
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is my first review ever on this site. i just wanna say i like the story, you can really feel the emotions as you read it. i'm looking forward to the next chapter. ^ ^
person Patricia
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah Good your back.
person Fi-Fi
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the story and your other ones especially Broadway Baby. Beautifully written and this one is very accurate according to the whole rape situation. Keep it up, your writing style is remarkable and unfortunately for me, I can't write as well as you do. Perhaps as they say, practice makes perfect and hopefully I will be able to write halfway as well as you. The story line is great and hopefully it just gets better. Bye-bye!
person Liz
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO!!!! YOU CAN'T STOP THERE?!?!?!? please be nice and email me when you update it!! Del you are sooo evil!!!

Luv ya much
huggles
~Liz~
person thoughts
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you. You are right in your comments at the beginning of the story. Rape is often used as a plot devicd lid little is said about the impact of the event on the person's life. I have not had the misfortune of being raped myself but having known others who have been, I have seen some of the emotional devestation that it can reap. I hope you will continue this story. I hope you will continue to show how Kagome continues to work her way to living with the event. Thank you for taking the subject seriously.