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for Summer Heat

by Tiranth

person RavenShadow
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very cute! But I need more please update soon!
person kenji
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
aww, i hope kagome 'convinces' inuyasha notgo with ith kikyo when its all over like he said he would
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Tiranth! just read the first chap and I have to say just wow! you captured my interest with the first cute little taste. You
got me wanting to read Inu and Kag stories again! Now I must say that I will continue on to the next chap. Tasty and cute
story! Ras.
person Rasberries
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh yea! me likey. Drama to popsickles. Love the way you write Inuyasha. Why does he have to go with Kikyo? Tell me why!
Oh well, at least Kagome told him she loved him. That has go to count for something! I know you are a Sesshomaru fan,
Tiranth. Please consider doing a story with Sess and Rin. With your talent you could make an incredibly fantastic fic! You
have a simple way of storytelling that says volumes. This is so good. Keep it up. I will look out for your update and see how hot it really gets.
Ras.
person No One Knows
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
nice ending, write more soon
person MysticInca
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very mellow, but I liked it. hehe, such a tease! I can't help but feel sorry for Inu Yasha when Kagome notices the popsicle on her homework. hehe, I like.

Mystic
person MomOfFluffyAndFluffier
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story, would love to see more...maybe another chap (i.e. What happens when Sota's gone?)

poor Inu Yasha, he's gonna be in the hot seat when Kagome sees the melted popsicle all over her school stuff and he's still gotta come down from his sugar high.

too bad for Sota kno know how much kids look forward to the after school treat...he can have an apple - it's better for him! (a mom talkin' there)
person DelKaidin
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Go away Souta.... you'll find out all about popsicles when your older.... Now you need to continue this....
person Mija
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg that was just too pricless..poor Inu didnt quite get any did he??? lmaoo but I liked this alot, espcially the ending when Sota asks who ate all the popcicles..hehe bad Inu..greedy Inu..hehe ya gotta love him and only he would think of licking up his mess..hehe luv it luv it..:-) huggles and smiles Mija