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September 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OW OW The spelling errors they burn
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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok I'm not trying to be mean here or anything. I honestly like your story line very much, but I found it very difficult to read. You might want to try typing this stuff up on Word, and therefore having the benefit of spelling/grammer check. Also you are lacking a serious amount of punctuation.
I do love your story though please update soon.
I do love your story though please update soon.
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December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is _so_ cute ^_^!! Pl upd update soon =^-^=!!
~Rainy Diamond12
~Rainy Diamond12
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October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you must go on i want to see what happens next....oh and put some inuxsesshy in it please!!!!
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October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
looks like a really good start, hope you write more soon