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for You Wanna What??

by Carisa

person Angelstars
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sugoi! Wow, what a start; it was so intense and the emotional discriptions...wow, that's all i can say! Left me speechless, and the lemon was wonderfully written and perfectly scripted. I love the beginning already... but am i getting a split up or time apart thing coming on?--i really do think they'd never cope being apart especially as they've both discovered how in love they are. love and lust--a powerful combo.

Continue soon please, I'll be checking regulary from now on for updates!

All the best,
Angie.
person Rachel
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEEEEE!!!!!! YOU WROTE IT! YOU WROTE IT! YOU WROTE IT!!! (dancing about gleefully)

I ADORED Dirty Little Secret, and I am very much lookingwardward to this one. Keep writing!! :)
person CAT
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love you, tempest! This is so great!
person Mija
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg that was totally intense..not the lemon which was wonderfull but the depth of thier emotions and thoughts..you wrote them out soo well and soo detailed I was mesmerized by it all...damn if only there was truelly that sort of love in the world..sigh...great chapter..will there be more??? I hope so but I cant stop the thought of something happening to make them part...anyway it was wonderfull I love your writing loved DLS alot..now that was hot..hehe..well till next time huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
person KagomeReborn
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh goby the blessed gods your back, you sequeled my fav sin dls....i lov you.... as i am humbled by you lemony skills...maybe one mine will reach there....sigh ... my lemons pale in the wanton lust that drips from every crevice of your flics, its sex like liquid drug your hypnotise your readers into a binding everglades of pure passion numming the senses as we are transported to a plain of estasy....

there i think that sums it up,,, i do a faa favor to ask though,,, i flic Close Encounters , ya see i would lov it if you had any advise for me bout it, i know im grammar crappy but would like to improve the 'encounters'' if you can help i would be most addemitly gratful..
person Tiranth
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a great opening for a sequel.....you're not gonna kill Inu are ya????
person Umi2583
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sweet mother of god! There IS a sequel! ^_^ I look forward to your stories, and I like the way DLS was more of the build-up to the sex story, and you wanna what?? is more of the after math {so far} I hope you continue to update!
person Laydhwk
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That was incrediable! I'm literally speechless, and left grasping in vain for words.......WOW!
person NHYEMIA
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Tempest, You are such a fabulous writer. I loved the other story and you don't disapoint in this one. I'm not talking about the lemon scenes so much as the writing style. Please keep writting more. I look forward to reading every story you write. ((Inuyasha anyways))

.^_^. Nhyemia
person RavenShadow
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, thank you, thank you,nk ynk you!!! For writting a sequel, I loved the first story so much! I was sad that it ended but happy for the char. Please update soon, I need more!!!!