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for Girls are bad for your health

by roseplunkett

person Anon
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Dee Dee
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh, cool. Update soon.
person Anon
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is this a Mary Sue or a self insertion fic? Also you really need to work on your grammar and paragraphing, it is way hard to read. You need to invest in a spellchecker as well. Or a beta. I've looked at both of your stories and they BOTH look like self inserted Mary Sues. Both OC are going on the 'perfect' track and it's really annoying. The only reviews you will probably get are flames and people complaining which I couldn't blame them.
person ptbear
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great start to the story. Update soon. Can't wait to see how everyone reacts to each other. If pairings Hiei/Kagome, Sess/Yukina, and Inuyasha with Jurie?.
person Megan Consoer
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person BadAssGrl
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please keep it comin can't wait for the next chap so please hurry.
person ApriL
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Update soon pLease
person darkspiritgirl666
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i like it :)
person Mija
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh me likes this story alot!!!! luv Inu and Yu Yu charactors and sooooooo cant wait for the party and everything soo please please please update soon k?? ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija..:-)