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person Last Sunset
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!!!
person No One Knows
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Kick ass second chapter!!!!!!!!!! Hope you write more!
person Hentai-Fan
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You are so evil. That was grimey, fucked up, and wrong. (Evil cliffys) loved the story though.
person ApriL
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
H goo good so far...pe ude udpate soon!
person PsYcHoKeLl
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was intresting. i saw the thing for the challenge but didn't think so many would do it. one thing, i don't think i would ever let anyone use a popsicle like that on me. have you ever herd the story of the girl with the tuna fish?
person No One Knows
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Fucking awesome lemon!! Can't wait to see the next chapter, and I really hope you win the contest!
person RekkaShinen
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Me likes...Good...Yummy...I'm never gonna look at a popsicle the same way again though...
person Soranji-chan
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
your stories always leave me wanting more..that was such a goo use of a popsicle....can't wait for more
person RavenShadow
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok more please! This is good so far
person Marieka
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
O.O eeep!
It's worth the review! Oh my, now I need some chocky! *sigh*
thank you for the wonderful lemon I cant wait for S'more!