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October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, I applaud you! That was amaziYou\You're so descriptive, it's amazing. I wish I could write lemons as well as you... hell, I wish I could write half as well as you! ^^;;
Hope you win, you definitly deserve it! I'm just sad it's over! xD
Hope you win, you definitly deserve it! I'm just sad it's over! xD
schedule
October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh lordy lord ^_________________^
schedule
October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I reviewed. Very good. Some spelling errors, but everyone has those. You are very discriptive, and so should win. I hope you win.
rancrance
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October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
How could I not leave a review? I've read just about all the non-yaoi challenges so far, and in my opinion, they aren't close. I really hope you win and I hope your story continues to do well.^^
schedule
October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Boy.....does that take me back.......Love the use of delicious frozen goodies for oral pleasure. Always a fun thing to do on a hot
summer day.......hehehe ^_^
summer day.......hehehe ^_^
schedule
October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG(I just read the second chapter) I had an orgasm it was so good! Make another one please!
schedule
October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
::laughs:: A wonderful chapter with a theme! Brush your teeth after every meal.....^^ Sorry couldn't resist it. Once again a very hot chapter, leaving the readers in an uncomfortable state. ::must take cold shower....:: Great job! Will there be more is this the end?
Mystic
Mystic
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October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*Fans self* I knew it could get hotter. So much hotter. Wow, that was good. Haha, really good.
schedule
October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow. that was better than most lemons. when i read that, i was listening to "heat of the night". funny, ne?
schedule
October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Uuff... That was so... Woaa!! I Enjoyed the chapter!!
BTW, a little question... are you going to update Unwilling Mate??
BTW, a little question... are you going to update Unwilling Mate??