AFF Fiction Portal
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*closes her slack mouth and swallows harshly* I'm never gonna look at ice cream cones ever the same again. I'm either gonna need a really cold shower now or accost my S.O. .... *coughs as she gathers her self control* Damn that was good, I really enjoyed it very much. It's so much fun to tease guys while eating things like popsicles and Blowpops. I'll have to get round to reading your other stuff soon, don't think I could handle it at the moment though. *gives a toothie grin* Keep up the good work, there is never enough hentai!!
person Iyasu
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice and hot! I loved it! Actually, I think I want to try some of that out... hmm... thanks for the idea!
person Megan Consoer
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule May 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
kinky son of a bitch.....i mean that in a good way *with a perverted grin*
person Machiko
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! That was so good. ^^ I hope that you'll write more of these lemony goondess stuff. :P I'll be reading the next chapter after this review. ;)

Lovely work! I loved your style and your use of the popsicle was quite unique!! XD I've never heard of anything like that before. =0 Good job! Really well done. ^-^

I'll be reading more of your stories soon - so, be prepared to expect more reviews from me. =)

Love, Machiko. ^__^
person Naito_Mitsukai
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lmao!! that was AWESOME!! but but but! what happened to the claiming of the kagome and the passing of the phallius into the female sex?? O.o lolz oh yeah! also gotta love the sex tips at the end!! XD that was awesome! *i already knew that personally, but it was still hallarious for you to add it to the end of your storey!* lolz anyways FINISH DA STOREY!! *tear* ... u know what would suck 4 them? either shippou or kouga walking in on them right now! XD lolz *i would laugh my ass off!* anyways ttylz FINISH YOUR KICK ASS STOREY!! *please* XD <3
person Alko
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Magnificent work!! I just loved this story. ^_^
I think I like it second place!! The first one I liked most was the one with Koga and Kagome, since it was longer and a bit more detailed, but this one was excellent as well. ^_<
Wonderful job. I look forward to more of your creations in the future.
9.0/10!

-Alko
person Reo
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice lemon,great use of foods,and,uh nice tip (eeeeeewwww gross.....)
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...that was some good stuff. wow. reading through old posts, you find intresting things, yes sir're. wow. i hope you won something for that. great job with the lemons and use of...well...cold...stuff. great job, great fic.
person Cassi
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good material. Very creative. Loved it!