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January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very well done! I liked it very much! You should make a sequil...with Sango and Miroku. lol. That I would like to see
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January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! That was so good! I loved it. And I was SO surprised at the end, when the witch had actually MEANT for that all to happen. But that's really good and really cool. You're really good at writing. Well, just wanted to tell you all that.
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November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well Well that was a happy twist on the part of the witch. LO'Ori'Orion
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October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
whoa!! that was friggin' cool!! idea with love witch was just gorgeous.
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October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
holla back that was off the chain^________________^
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October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
interesting twist! never heard of a story starting out with something like that!
nice plot line, maybe make it longer? Maybe you could have let it drag out with repeated trys of them trying to do it...
you know, let them have internal provs and stuff like, it sorta felt a little two-dimensional and i didn't get a feel of the conflict
that they were going through. Nice ending though! with sango and miroku up next...now that should be interesting! what threat
would you use there? i mean, she's a love witch right?!?! she has to have variety in her work or else it gets stale and she would
get bored of her profession!
since sango is used to risking her life...maybe she wouldn't be really panicky like kagome and end up figuring a way out
(she is a demon exterminator...she would have to be good at getting out of tight situation!). maybe miroku should be the one to
get the threat! then he could drop his 'clown mask' and let his serious/sensitive side show...which would get sango's sympathy...
and then maybe she would...well...*cough cough* you know! and for a stunner...don't make sango
a virgin! let her play out her 'hidden fantasies' with miroku! (finally! *evil chuckle*)
you could really sink your teeth into how sango was de-virgintized, how miroku felt with his life-span shortened and his mission
of finding a wife how how he was getting sick of having to ask women because he was compelled to!). okay, i'm running away
with myself (i tend to do this...*grr*), bottom line, good story and i can't wait to see the next one! now get writing! (standing ovation)
nice plot line, maybe make it longer? Maybe you could have let it drag out with repeated trys of them trying to do it...
you know, let them have internal provs and stuff like, it sorta felt a little two-dimensional and i didn't get a feel of the conflict
that they were going through. Nice ending though! with sango and miroku up next...now that should be interesting! what threat
would you use there? i mean, she's a love witch right?!?! she has to have variety in her work or else it gets stale and she would
get bored of her profession!
since sango is used to risking her life...maybe she wouldn't be really panicky like kagome and end up figuring a way out
(she is a demon exterminator...she would have to be good at getting out of tight situation!). maybe miroku should be the one to
get the threat! then he could drop his 'clown mask' and let his serious/sensitive side show...which would get sango's sympathy...
and then maybe she would...well...*cough cough* you know! and for a stunner...don't make sango
a virgin! let her play out her 'hidden fantasies' with miroku! (finally! *evil chuckle*)
you could really sink your teeth into how sango was de-virgintized, how miroku felt with his life-span shortened and his mission
of finding a wife how how he was getting sick of having to ask women because he was compelled to!). okay, i'm running away
with myself (i tend to do this...*grr*), bottom line, good story and i can't wait to see the next one! now get writing! (standing ovation)
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October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWW!!! That was so good!! Heheehee...a love witch....good one! Keep up the good work!
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October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*clap, clap* Very nice. I did indeed enjoy it. However...I'm not too fond of "doggy style* lol
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October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG!
::laughs and swoons:: That was soooo kawaii! ^_^_^_^_^
Keep on writin'!
::laughs and swoons:: That was soooo kawaii! ^_^_^_^_^
Keep on writin'!
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October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HEHEHEHEHEEH SO That witch was only fooling them?? LOL! so the witch is the match maker of love souls ne? Well she did an awesome job lol inuyasha and kagome are sooo totally made for eachother!
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