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for Love Witch

by gloriaston

person AO
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I don't know if you meant for it to be a bit rediculous, but isn't it a BAD idea to defend your virginity to someone who you think wants to kill you for it? I mean, is it really so horrible to lie to someone who will kill you? I know that you needed it to work for the whole thing to turn out, but it left me a little baffled. Interesting atleast.
person Rawben
schedule October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic!! and pleeeeeeease could you continue to make a second chapter? i would really like it! <3!!!
person Birdie
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG...that was just too much!
I'd love to see a sequal with Sango and Roku!!
person Anon
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL, OMG that was a great story!!!!
person Natalie
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lol the ending was hillarious! great stuff... glad i clicked on the first inuyasha story!
person Nicole
schedule August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Even though it was short...I loved it!
schedule July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's a nice story. I thought it was so sweet the way InuYasha was so gentle with Kagome, and I liked the twist at the end. You could stand to work on your grammer a bit, though; you mixed up some words, like try/true and dam/damn, and it interfered a bit with the flow of the story. Nevertheless, I enjoyed it.
person inunaiomi
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very good i was just searching throug the fics today and found this although its old you should still write more its really good, one with miroku and sango would be awsome.
person Reikai
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I didn't expect that the witch was a matchmaker, that was a great suprise ending, though the story could use a bit of editing, there was a bunch of typos and such, like someone was up three in the morning and wanted to get back to bed and skip the spell check, other that that, that was an excellent lemon.
person jennifer
schedule June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awww!!! loved it ~ it had all the fun romance and sex and then the sweetest little ending ever!! i am totally checking out any other stories you might have posted